Just a Girl Lost 2

Just a girl lost~ Here I share bits & pieces of me, in poetry, prose, music & posts from writers who inspire me.

The Moment I Saw You



The moment I saw you
Time stood still
I was lost~ entranced
as three Fates wove us into dance
the Earth un-spun forgot her place
but, for the gods, her saving grace
The smitten Wind, tame as a lamb
laughed at the Sun sudden shy
blushing in clouds behind the sky

Under your spell Life hypnotized
and then
you looked into my eyes
You touched my soul
I held your light
a universe returned to right
Blue carousel spinning again
Chariot of gods, ghost horses ran
all frenzied haste to beat the sand

My thundering heart
the only sound
whirlwind of thoughts
spinning me round
invading skin ~ heaven and sin
tasting life ~ drowning within
a newborn joy ~ beyond the breach
love’s miracle ~ within my reach

A brave new world
finally found
Lost in a place
I’d never known
A place deeper
than skin and bone
A place my Soul
knew all along
the place was You
the place was Home


*endlessly, an Ink on Paper by LOUI JOVER

Author: justagirllost2

Just a girl lost in some ways, found in others. Writing my thoughts, ideas, dreams, realities, pieces of me ~ not all pretty~ definitely real ~ I'm a mother with faith in God's divine providence. Belief that my mistakes and selfishness and chaotic past are a jumbled tapestry that in the end will be woven heavenly. That all is never what it seems. That good will always claim victory and there is a plan beyond what human eyes and our fallen natures can see. My three children are my miracles, my life, my blessings. They inspire me to be a better woman and human being. I hope that you and I share and learn from each other in the beauty and reality of life on this ever evolving journey. xo ~ This is a place without masks ~ without broken glass paths ~ This is a place to be free To be the me He created me to be ~ Just a girl lost XxX

30 thoughts on “The Moment I Saw You

  1. I am moved by this poem, such gorgeous words you’ve shared. I’m new to your blog, will surely be back to read more of you. By the way, you look like Lana Del Rey πŸ™‚

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  2. You captured mine and oh, the photo!

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  3. Gorgeous words from a gorgeous soul – exquisite, as Ax said ❀

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  4. Exquisite, emotive, beautiful piece!

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    • Thank you so much! It was a song completely unplanned, but waiting to be heard I guess. 😊
      Funny how writing ebbs and flows. A hide & seek sea it seems
      I prefer tsunamis any day

      Thank you for reading me. You are most appreciated πŸƒπŸŒΊ
      Have a wonderful night


      • You’re very welcome!

        I’m with you on tsunamis. The high tide cresting the causeway spilling through pen. My ‘Rebellious Bloom’ was a wink & a wave of a sprinkle teasing the breeze then migrating for some time.

        Have a wonderful.

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      • ‘a wink and a wave of a sprinkle teasing the breeze then migrating for time’…wow. I like that! You do have a way with words. πŸ™‚ Have a wonderful weekend too! xo


  5. Eric and Dana said it, I’ll just add…exquisite!

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  6. Stunning words and Poetess!!

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  7. Oh this is beautiful, Suza! i love it! So sweet. πŸ™‚

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