Just a Girl Lost 2

Just a girl lost~ Here I share bits & pieces of me, in poetry, prose, music & posts from writers who inspire me.

The Moment I Saw You






The moment I saw you

Time stood still

I was lost~ entranced

as three Fates wove us into dance

the Earth un-spun forgot her place

but, for the gods her saving grace

The smitten Wind, tame as a lamb

laughed at the Sun sudden shy

blushing in clouds behind the sky


Under your spell Life hypnotized

and then

you looked into my eyes

You touched my soul

I held your light

a universe returned to right

Blue carousel spinning again

Chariot of gods, ghost horses ran

all frenzied haste to beat the sand


My thundering heart

the only sound

whirlwind of thoughts

spinning me round

invading skin ~ heaven and sin

tasting life ~ drowning within

a newborn joy ~ beyond the breach

love’s miracle ~ within my reach


A brave new world

finally found

Lost in a place 

I’d never known

A place deeper

than skin and bone

A place my Soul 

knew all along

the place was You

the place was Home




*endlessly, an Ink on Paper by LOUI JOVER  


Author: justagirllost2

Just a girl lost in some ways, found in others. Writing my thoughts, ideas, dreams, realities, pieces of me... not all pretty~ definitely real. I'm a mother with faith in God's divine providence that my mistakes and selfishness, my immaturity and past are all part of a journey. That all is never what it seems. That good will always claim victory and there is a plan beyond what human eyes and our fallen natures can see. My three children are my miracles, my life, my blessing and they inspire me to be a better woman and human being. I hope that you and I share and learn from each other in the beauty and reality of life on this ever evolving journey. xo ~ This is a place without masks~ without broken glass paths ~ This is a place to be free To be me~Just a girl lost XxX

30 thoughts on “The Moment I Saw You

  1. I am moved by this poem, such gorgeous words you’ve shared. I’m new to your blog, will surely be back to read more of you. By the way, you look like Lana Del Rey 🙂

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  2. You captured mine and oh, the photo!

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  3. Gorgeous words from a gorgeous soul – exquisite, as Ax said ❤

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  4. Exquisite, emotive, beautiful piece!

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    • Thank you so much! It was a song completely unplanned, but waiting to be heard I guess. 😊
      Funny how writing ebbs and flows. A hide & seek sea it seems
      I prefer tsunamis any day

      Thank you for reading me. You are most appreciated 🍃🌺
      Have a wonderful night


      • You’re very welcome!

        I’m with you on tsunamis. The high tide cresting the causeway spilling through pen. My ‘Rebellious Bloom’ was a wink & a wave of a sprinkle teasing the breeze then migrating for some time.

        Have a wonderful.

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      • ‘a wink and a wave of a sprinkle teasing the breeze then migrating for time’…wow. I like that! You do have a way with words. 🙂 Have a wonderful weekend too! xo


  5. Eric and Dana said it, I’ll just add…exquisite!

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  6. Stunning words and Poetess!!

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  7. Oh this is beautiful, Suza! i love it! So sweet. 🙂

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