Just a Girl Lost 2

Just a girl lost~ Here I share bits & pieces of me, in poetry, prose, music & posts from writers who inspire me.

Sweet Ruin


*I wrote this piece over a year ago.  I did a recording. I hate the recording, but I like the fact that it is kind of diary of my voice & my writing.

A way to keep the originality of my compositions. I shall definitely be re-recording this poem, because it is one of my favorites.

This piece still resonates very much today as it did over a year ago.

I apologize for the uncouth, tacky, breathy recitation.  I got swept up in the moment , blame my Muse… 😉





Make me your goddess

on you altar I wait

my body~ your offering

I sacrifice to you~ all of me


My lips~ bite them

tantalize them to bits

of devoured bliss

my neck adore

with your teeth


I want delicate bruises

along the insides of my thighs

from your fingertips


Crush my hips with yours

as we join again & again

Every inch of my skin

aches for you


Speak to me

in tongues

of your lust


Speak to me

of my sweet ruin






Author: justagirllost2

Just a girl lost in some ways, found in others. Writing my thoughts, ideas, dreams, realities, pieces of me... not all pretty~ definitely real. I'm a mother with faith in God's divine providence that my mistakes and selfishness, my immaturity and past are all part of a journey. That all is never what it seems. That good will always claim victory and there is a plan beyond what human eyes and our fallen natures can see. My three children are my miracles, my life, my blessing and they inspire me to be a better woman and human being. I hope that you and I share and learn from each other in the beauty and reality of life on this ever evolving journey. xo ~ This is a place without masks~ without broken glass paths ~ This is a place to be free To be me~Just a girl lost XxX

9 thoughts on “Sweet Ruin

  1. A wonderful example of erotic art and prose, Monique. 🙂

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  2. Excellent write made all the more interesting by your hypnotic voice. Happy you reblogged this, since it was long before I started blogging.

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  3. 1. You have nothing for which to apologize. Your voice is beautiful and the manner of your recording is very sensual.
    2. If you do rerecord this do not erase nor lose the original. IMHO it is perfect and the only way to improve it would to hear your words in person.

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  4. Your reading of this was sublime actually. I severely doubt that you’d need to record it again! And the poem is exquisite too. 🙂

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  5. I remember it well


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